I can’t get this right, so I’m posting two poems. Feel free to leave me feedback about which one you prefer or don’t.
Shards of rage and jealousy
pierce the soul
pain’s disposition a lasting bequest
recovery uncovered – life’s unwelcome guest
(Recovered) Alcoholic’s Lament
WARNING: DO NOT APPROACH
Rage and jealousy lie buried together
in a shallow grave
scrape the surface and find them
companions fit to shatter any structure
crumbling all foundations
Shards may pierce your soul
Some of you will worry, so I feel compelled to add that this is not about me or my family.
The Scream is in the public domain.